The next plot line will be the "romance" subplot. I put romance in quotes, because this is by no means a romance novel. There will be no happy ending. There will be no sex that is shown, and perhaps none alluded too. They won't end up together.
Next step- He asks her to move in with him, but she refuses him. She had a lot of excuses, such as not wanting her finances tangled with his while he is starting a business.
Good news--While he is driving she calls him to say she wants to move in with him after thinking about it. It is then that he gets into an accident.
Next step - After his accident, she offers to let him move in with her. At firs this seems like a good thing, as she can take care of him al lthe time, but it soon becomes clear that he has lost his motivation with life. He spends all of his time watching sports, eating, drinking, not shaving, not showering, becoming a waste. She gives him an ultimatum, and he tries to follow it.
Disaster - She confronts him at work because she thinks he deserves a better job than this. She demands he get a better job than this. This leads to him getting fired, because he does something bad there.
Worse Disaster - The keys on the apartment are changed. He can't go back inside or get his stuff.
Apology- She sends him an emailed apology. He is about to reply, but something comes up.
Self realization-After getting hsi new "job" he finally replies to her email. He tells her that he doesn't want to move back in, although he thinks of sending her an uglier email first.
Sunday, August 17, 2008
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"Disaster" -- "Worse Disaster"
I like that!
Keep going! :)
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